The Book Needs Work, But Hopefully the Author will Consider Resurrecting It

Sat, 01 Aug 2015 20:16:15 +0000

I received a free copy of this book and it looked interesting. But this book is really more of a first draft than a final manuscript, no matter that it’s published and sold on Amazon. I have been in several writing groups for years and that experience combined with my own writing efforts makes me think that this story needs more work before it’s ready to be read.

Some of the problems I had with it include:

It’s written in first-person with mostly I-subject sentences. In other words, most of the sentences read:

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The Book Needs Work, But Hopefully the Author will Consider Resurrecting It

Some of the problems I had with it include: